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Post by JazzBuddah on Sept 20, 2006 1:45:13 GMT -5
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Post by SCV on Sept 20, 2006 5:17:27 GMT -5
EXCELLENT SCORE 5/5 Still can improve the pict yet the plot of the story is heavy ^^ i'm crack up nyahahahahhahahaha..BTW sorry for the Feed back.
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Post by Z-Ramm [Inactive] on Sept 20, 2006 15:47:33 GMT -5
Again, nice. You should get a website and make a webcomic.
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Post by JazzBuddah on Sept 20, 2006 16:46:58 GMT -5
tried making one. never got any hits so i thought why not try posting here
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Post by SCV on Sept 20, 2006 17:44:18 GMT -5
........my ploting is kinda sux ><" sooo i need a lot of practice around.
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Post by JazzBuddah on Sept 26, 2006 7:38:22 GMT -5
Allright! That brings us to the conclusion of chapter 1. Make sure to return on Saturday for a brand new Happy Lil' Tomato followed by another Grey Matter next week! Next weeks episode 'Chapter 2: Shopping for Heather' A story containing real people I once knew, it is a tale about lost love and evil X-mass presents from beyond the grave! See Ya!
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Post by JazzBuddah on Sept 26, 2006 8:30:53 GMT -5
By the way SVC. I'm not sure I fully understood your last post but did you say you were having storyline problems? If so I could probably help you out. I have to many idea's the way things are, the only problem is i don't always have the time or skill to put them down on paper.
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Post by SCV on Sept 26, 2006 9:22:43 GMT -5
==" Is ok, there bunch of writer in malaysia waiting for artis to give thier hands ==" Anyway, Your comic is very good, but compared with standard comic like marvel or japanese manga, You got a few sign of problem need to notice.
1. comic is graphic novel but it must illustrated fully with balanced pict and words. I found some of collums are wrong but some are correct especially the last page of your comic.
2. the composition of the flow of story, it seem like you got it all right.
Well, i hope these two hints might give a little help.
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Post by JazzBuddah on Sept 27, 2006 6:14:54 GMT -5
yea, but you gotta keep in mind this is a simple hobby i do for my own enjoyment. I don't plan on making a career out of it.
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Post by SCV on Sept 27, 2006 7:44:35 GMT -5
^^ that's ok if you ignore my manga/ comic freak opinion ^^
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Post by JazzBuddah on Sept 27, 2006 11:15:37 GMT -5
heck no. I still worship manga artists, you know I'd never ignore your opinion SCV. I highly value it as a fellow artist.
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Post by MLB a.k.a. MattchuLB on Sept 27, 2006 13:31:20 GMT -5
Hey, great comic man! I look forward to the next installment, ;D Think you could PM me with anynew ones that you put up? Great comic though, really nicely drawn too. ;D
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Post by JazzBuddah on Oct 3, 2006 15:59:51 GMT -5
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Post by Z-Ramm [Inactive] on Oct 3, 2006 17:39:52 GMT -5
That was pretty good, you got me to laugh.
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Post by SCV on Oct 3, 2006 19:04:16 GMT -5
burn!! teddy!! burn!! ^^
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