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Post by angie on Aug 8, 2005 14:17:22 GMT -5
The nightmare is real, The horror has begun, A darkness has arrived, With the setting of the sun.
The undead they walk, Feasting on the living, The evil of the world, Has a new beginning.
I have to get out, Try to leave this place, See the rising of the sun, And another Human face.
Outside on the streets, The dead are everywhere, I walk a lonely path, Full of fear and despair.
The horror here is total, No-one left alive, Running for my life, Fighting to survive.
Salvation is denied me, The city gates are closed, Can't escape the nightmare, The horror that is close.
Back into the city, The streets are full of rubble, Fighting hard to survive, The Resident Evil.
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Post by Escachick357 on Aug 8, 2005 14:18:48 GMT -5
Hey, this is really really good. Excellent job.
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Post by UndeadDeadGuy on Aug 8, 2005 14:23:28 GMT -5
*Claps hands* if this was really your first attempt, it was good.
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Post by angie on Aug 8, 2005 14:28:53 GMT -5
It was both my first attempt at poetry and the characters first attempt at leaving. Thank you both.
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Diviners
Survivalist
"I ain't happy to see you...no I am ecstatic."
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Post by Diviners on Aug 8, 2005 15:20:26 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]::::APPLAUSE:::::[/glow]
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Post by Raine on Aug 8, 2005 16:12:49 GMT -5
Yeah, good job! I really like it!
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Post by angie on Aug 8, 2005 17:47:49 GMT -5
*Takes a bow* Thank you. Second attempt coming soon.
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