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Post by Lunapocalypse on Sept 23, 2006 8:47:57 GMT -5
If you could explain how it is wrong SCV that would be awesome.
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Post by SCV on Sept 23, 2006 9:14:47 GMT -5
the eyes of the shape is not as oval as the egg ==" tips: use the mirror as your guide, 100% work on me ^^
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Tabiris Rei
Survivalist
Living Doll... *Ahem* I perfer 'Toy Soldier' -Taby
Posts: 62
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Post by Tabiris Rei on Sept 23, 2006 11:17:48 GMT -5
This is my character Tabiris Rei, what do you guys think?
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Post by Lunapocalypse on Sept 23, 2006 11:26:37 GMT -5
That looks cool, I dont think SCV will be able to bore into you much on this one because of your art style and that it looks so good. The only problems I have is that his head could be ssslightly bigger, and you might want to change his expresion to more of a 'wtf!?' rather than a 'not again...' There is also the slack in the chains, but I'm just getting picky now, and its isn't that easy to make them curve in the right direction.
The placement of the quote also isn't very effective. Perhaps if you dropped the alpha slightly and put 'unidentified' in the top left and the 'me' one in the bottom right...well, that would just be my style.
Over all I give it a 4.3/5
And to save SCV the trouble, 'There is room for improvement'.
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Tabiris Rei
Survivalist
Living Doll... *Ahem* I perfer 'Toy Soldier' -Taby
Posts: 62
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Post by Tabiris Rei on Sept 23, 2006 12:33:35 GMT -5
Thats the same expression my character always wears... and it expresses how he feels... he's not 'like wtf?' he's not even like 'not again'. He's content.. not happy but content. I think his head is the right size too, his body may seem bigger because of the chains around him, but if you strip those away with his eyes and go back into his basic form he's the right poportion... at least I think so... also the chains are loose and not taught, because he's not really being confined too strongly... because he's not really trying to get away....
Though putting the text in better places might have been a good idea, i'm not going to edit my picture just for that.
Thank you for your kind review.
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Post by Myco Saber on Sept 23, 2006 12:43:50 GMT -5
i think SCV might said "detail is Great, Head slightly big? no problem." As I would said:"OmG, same as avatar, can't you change his expression once a while......"
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Tabiris Rei
Survivalist
Living Doll... *Ahem* I perfer 'Toy Soldier' -Taby
Posts: 62
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Post by Tabiris Rei on Sept 23, 2006 12:53:22 GMT -5
um... that avatar is just a colored inversion of this picture.... o,O
Also his expresion doesn't change much because of his nature.
he getts annoyed someimes like in my sig.
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Post by SCV on Sept 23, 2006 13:03:08 GMT -5
.......^&*%$% thanks to myco ruin my beauty sleep.........@.@
I see we got new player == let see........hmmmm......yeap myco said half right and G/A also said another half so basiclly they take over my comment, nothing else to said except 4.0/5
Change it's perspective will give a storming effect that what i can only hint.
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Tabiris Rei
Survivalist
Living Doll... *Ahem* I perfer 'Toy Soldier' -Taby
Posts: 62
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Post by Tabiris Rei on Sept 23, 2006 13:10:49 GMT -5
Thanks for the comments, but changing the perspective would be a whole new drawing, and the storm effect would ruin the calm 'I'm ok, I'm just in chains' feel I wanted for the picture.
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-BEAR-
Zombie Hunter
"I was a king; now I drag my throne."
Posts: 102
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Post by -BEAR- on Oct 9, 2006 17:16:47 GMT -5
Here is one I did at work today for my Character. Its a lame doodle, but my normal work looks a bit like this: Enjoy
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Post by SCV on Oct 10, 2006 4:28:37 GMT -5
nice and clean better than my work ==........Well done.
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Post by Lunapocalypse on Oct 10, 2006 11:56:50 GMT -5
Can't even make yourself type in a 5/5 SCV? tsk tsk tsk...that isn't very nice. But this art work is unreal, I feel like that dude is about to slice my head clean off. I give it a 10/5 Hope to see more soon *said in a threatening tone*...
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-BEAR-
Zombie Hunter
"I was a king; now I drag my throne."
Posts: 102
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Post by -BEAR- on Oct 10, 2006 12:06:05 GMT -5
Yes Ma'am *salutes*
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Post by Z-Ramm [Inactive] on Oct 10, 2006 15:26:32 GMT -5
That is pretty amazing. Very nice.
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-BEAR-
Zombie Hunter
"I was a king; now I drag my throne."
Posts: 102
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Post by -BEAR- on Oct 10, 2006 16:23:46 GMT -5
Thanks again! I have a bit of Non RE-related art too... I will post a couple bits on here and see what you think, if that is okay?
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